tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3217012316587200736.post1162017048193568615..comments2024-03-12T21:24:23.240-04:00Comments on Emily Bryan Romance: Red Pencil Thursday with . . . Myself!EmilyBryanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03542349086762747179noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3217012316587200736.post-17851251163627876172010-08-08T07:17:40.324-04:002010-08-08T07:17:40.324-04:00Agreed, Pat. There's something to be said for ...Agreed, Pat. There's something to be said for the raw original sometimes.EmilyBryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03542349086762747179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3217012316587200736.post-64731083374789136442010-08-08T07:16:47.238-04:002010-08-08T07:16:47.238-04:00Thanks, Maurine. I think the definition of a rake ...Thanks, Maurine. I think the definition of a rake is a man who ruins otherwise virtuous women. Sebastian's mistresses aren't debutants. He makes sure they go into the agreement with their eyes wide open.<br /><br />Or at least that's his plan till he meets Arabella.EmilyBryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03542349086762747179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3217012316587200736.post-11167691987858666202010-08-08T00:36:33.924-04:002010-08-08T00:36:33.924-04:00I can see your reasoning for the changes you sugge...I can see your reasoning for the changes you suggest. It read well in its original form and will read well with the changes. Do you sometimes think you can over edit a piece and make too many changes? There is a feel to the way something is written and that gives something to the story. If things are changed too much, it may read better, but you also may loose some of its flavor or feel.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3217012316587200736.post-60989763756817215972010-08-07T01:27:27.294-04:002010-08-07T01:27:27.294-04:00Do I think he's a bit of a rake? Maybe a littl...Do I think he's a bit of a rake? Maybe a little, but what is more enticing than a story where the heroine brings the hero to his knees? Whatever I might have considered needing a little work, you caught. As always, your prose is enticing and draws me into your story. Nicely done. Can't wait to read the rest of it.<br />MaurineAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com